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Txchicana · Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 12:22 am Post subject: I WROTE A FANFIC

well me and my bf wrote it, but its not like the other ones ive read its about the next eppy
were not done yet but heres what we have so far
PLZ LEAVE FEEDBACK even bad kind. i used anlot of ands and thens cuz i couldnt think of other words, PLZ FINISH READIN ITS NOT A SPOILER!!!!!!

Chapter 19 “Unlimited Potential”
The opening scene is Sylar in one of the rooms in mohinders house. He is looking for some information in mohinders stuff. He sees mohinders dad’s book, and smiles then throse it to the side. He finds a rubix cube and finishes it in 4 seconds. Then with his super hearing he hears the door open and hears Peter call out mohinders name. Then he says “I remember you” with his dark voice and pins Peter to the wall with his powers, then says “your like me aren’t you, id love to see how that works…” then starts cutting his forehead, and peter starts screaming in the beginning, but then stops screaming as sylar is finishing, Sylar looks a little confused and reaches for his foredead and whispers “ This is usually the part where people start screaming”. And when sylar is done he stares at peter and peter regenerates, and Sylar just smiles. “ Your can heal, hah what a neat trick.. but useless” Peter now looks mad and with a yell he breaks the telekinesis that was holding him on the wall and used his telekinetic powers to hurdle Sylar across the room onto a wall. Then when Sylar is on the ground he looks up just in time to watch peter go invisible, and Sylar looks so surprised and confused and yells out “What THE..” and before he can finish Peter telekinetically throws him on the wall again making a big dent in the wall.

Then the camera zoomes in on the damage to the wall then fades and zooms back out to a damaged building in the future and as the building is zooming out we see the words Chapter 19 “Unlimited Potential” on the window. The camera does a horizontal move to show Hiro and Ando walking in the streets, “How could I have let this happen?” whines Hiro with a had look on his face. “I thought I was going to be a hero.” “You are” says Ando. “This hasn’t happened yet we can still stop it, we can go back and..”. “And what” interrupts Hiro “We don’t even know what causes this tragedy, Ive let everybody down” Hiro looks as if hes about to cry then looks at his sword. “This sword didn’t even help me control my powers, I don’t deserve Takezo Kensei’s sword”. Then he drops the sword on the ground and walks off. “Hiro don’t do this, you can’t just quit” shouts Ando but Hiro doesn’t seem to be listening to Ando. Then it fades out to a shot of Clair in NYC.

“So how do you know Peter Petrelli?” Asks Clair while she’s drinking what appears to be coffee. “Hes my son” answers Mrs. Petrelli. A huge smile arose on Clair’s face and Mrs. Petrelli. “so he is my uncle, that’s awesome!” Then the smile wears off and she turns to the Haitian “ You knew about this, and you kept it a secret?”. And as the Haitian was going to answer Mrs. Petrelli cut him off and responded “He was trying to protect you from all of this”. “all of what, whats so wrong about seeing someone who cares about me?”. “Listen Clair, Peter is dangerous, he knows it that’s why hes run away.” Answers the Haitian. “He What?... How is he dangerous, he just heals like me!”. The Haitian looks frustrated and then answers “Clair, he can absorb other peoples powers and use them at will, but he can’t control them yet, he thinks that he is going to blow up and cause a huge explosion”. Clair now looks really confused and seems like she is trying not to cry. “ But he has a good heart I know he does, he saved me!”. “We know he did, but he’s changed” answered the Haitian. “NO! people like that don’t change” Clair argues “I agree but even if we could let you go with him we don’t know where he is, he could be anywhere”. Then a single tear fell from Clair’s eye.

The camera then starts closing in on a map of the world that is over there heads and then the shot fades into Mohinders map with the strings. Then you see Peter fly into it breaking the map in half. And some of the needles sink into peters back, but he pulls them out and heals. “What the hell are you?” asks Sylar. “I was about to ask you the same question” answers Peter. Then he builds up telekinesis hit, and Sylar does the same then they both throw there power at each other and the collision causes a sphere of air and explodes causes the computers and stuff to blow up. That causes a fire, and the fires set the sprinkler system on and it puts off the fire. Now all wet they continue to throw and collide telekinesis throws. Which now looks even cooler for lack of a better word because you could see the outline of the collisions in the water sprinkles. Then Sylar appears to have realized and/or remembered something, then he extends his hands and electricity shoots out of his hands, Peter was not expecting that and freaks out, then covers his face with his arms and screams. Then all seems to be quite, and he uncovers his face to see that everything was still, he had stopped time all the way to the electricity shots which had almost hit him. Then he slowely walks toward Sylar through the water sprinkles. He smiles and throws Sylar toward the wall with telekinesis and all goes back to regular time. Sylar slams into the wall and the electricity breaks a hole in the wall, then Sylar looks at Peter terrified as we have never seen him before. “wha,wha, what was that?”, “My little secret” answered Peter with a smile. “wait,wait,wait w,we don’t have to fight, we both have unlimited potential, we can both rule this pathetic world, and punish those who don’t deserve this gift. Its evolution, common what do ya say? Natural Selection” Sylar pleads. “That wont work on me” he answers in a dark voice, and then yells “ You’re a murderer!”. And pins Sylar to the wall. Then Sylar struggles and screams then breaks free and when he does he flies out of the window.

Txchicana · Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 12:23 am Post subject: HEY GUYS I WROTE A FANFIC!!

well me and my bf wrote it, but its not like the other ones ive read its about the next eppy
were not done yet but heres what we have so far
PLZ LEAVE FEEDBACK even bad kind. i used anlot of ands and thens cuz i couldnt think of other words, PLZ FINISH READIN ITS NOT A SPOILER!!!!!!

Chapter 19 “Unlimited Power”
The opening scene is Sylar in one of the rooms in mohinders house. He is looking for some information in mohinders stuff. He sees mohinders dad’s book, and smiles then throse it to the side. He finds a rubix cube and finishes it in 4 seconds. Then with his super hearing he hears the door open and hears Peter call out mohinders name. Then he says “I remember you” with his dark voice and pins Peter to the wall with his powers, then says “your like me aren’t you, id love to see how that works…” then starts cutting his forehead, and peter starts screaming in the beginning, but then stops screaming as sylar is finishing, Sylar looks a little confused and reaches for his foredead and whispers “ This is usually the part where people start screaming”. And when sylar is done he stares at peter and peter regenerates, and Sylar just smiles. “ Your can heal, hah what a neat trick.. but useless” Peter now looks mad and with a yell he breaks the telekinesis that was holding him on the wall and used his telekinetic powers to hurdle Sylar across the room onto a wall. Then when Sylar is on the ground he looks up just in time to watch peter go invisible, and Sylar looks so surprised and confused and yells out “What THE..” and before he can finish Peter telekinetically throws him on the wall again making a big dent in the wall.

Then the camera zoomes in on the damage to the wall then fades and zooms back out to a damaged building in the future and as the building is zooming out we see the words Chapter 19 “Unlimited Potential” on the window. The camera does a horizontal move to show Hiro and Ando walking in the streets, “How could I have let this happen?” whines Hiro with a had look on his face. “I thought I was going to be a hero.” “You are” says Ando. “This hasn’t happened yet we can still stop it, we can go back and..”. “And what” interrupts Hiro “We don’t even know what causes this tragedy, Ive let everybody down” Hiro looks as if hes about to cry then looks at his sword. “This sword didn’t even help me control my powers, I don’t deserve Takezo Kensei’s sword”. Then he drops the sword on the ground and walks off. “Hiro don’t do this, you can’t just quit” shouts Ando but Hiro doesn’t seem to be listening to Ando. Then it fades out to a shot of Clair in NYC.

“So how do you know Peter Petrelli?” Asks Clair while she’s drinking what appears to be coffee. “Hes my son” answers Mrs. Petrelli. A huge smile arose on Clair’s face and Mrs. Petrelli. “so he is my uncle, that’s awesome!” Then the smile wears off and she turns to the Haitian “ You knew about this, and you kept it a secret?”. And as the Haitian was going to answer Mrs. Petrelli cut him off and responded “He was trying to protect you from all of this”. “all of what, whats so wrong about seeing someone who cares about me?”. “Listen Clair, Peter is dangerous, he knows it that’s why hes run away.” Answers the Haitian. “He What?... How is he dangerous, he just heals like me!”. The Haitian looks frustrated and then answers “Clair, he can absorb other peoples powers and use them at will, but he can’t control them yet, he thinks that he is going to blow up and cause a huge explosion”. Clair now looks really confused and seems like she is trying not to cry. “ But he has a good heart I know he does, he saved me!”. “We know he did, but he’s changed” answered the Haitian. “NO! people like that don’t change” Clair argues “I agree but even if we could let you go with him we don’t know where he is, he could be anywhere”. Then a single tear fell from Clair’s eye.

The camera then starts closing in on a map of the world that is over there heads and then the shot fades into Mohinders map with the strings. Then you see Peter fly into it breaking the map in half. And some of the needles sink into peters back, but he pulls them out and heals. “What the hell are you?” asks Sylar. “I was about to ask you the same question” answers Peter. Then he builds up telekinesis hit, and Sylar does the same then they both throw there power at each other and the collision causes a sphere of air and explodes causes the computers and stuff to blow up. That causes a fire, and the fires set the sprinkler system on and it puts off the fire. Now all wet they continue to throw and collide telekinesis throws. Which now looks even cooler for lack of a better word because you could see the outline of the collisions in the water sprinkles. Then Sylar appears to have realized and/or remembered something, then he extends his hands and electricity shoots out of his hands, Peter was not expecting that and freaks out, then covers his face with his arms and screams. Then all seems to be quite, and he uncovers his face to see that everything was still, he had stopped time all the way to the electricity shots which had almost hit him. Then he slowely walks toward Sylar through the water sprinkles. He smiles and throws Sylar toward the wall with telekinesis and all goes back to regular time. Sylar slams into the wall and the electricity breaks a hole in the wall, then Sylar looks at Peter terrified as we have never seen him before. “wha,wha, what was that?”, “My little secret” answered Peter with a smile. “wait,wait,wait w,we don’t have to fight, we both have unlimited potential, we can both rule this pathetic world, and punish those who don’t deserve this gift. Its evolution, common what do ya say? Natural Selection” Sylar pleads. “That wont work on me” he answers in a dark voice, and then yells “ You’re a murderer!”. And pins Sylar to the wall. Then Sylar struggles and screams then breaks free and when he does he flies out of the window.

BYD · Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 3:27 pm Post subject:

moving to proper forum.

BYD · Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 3:28 pm Post subject:

merging with identical thread