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Nameless Paints the Future...


Joined: 30 Oct 2006 Posts: 165 Location: Independence, MO Reputation:                                                                       votes: 6 28.98 Waffles
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 11:51 pm Post subject: Here I am to save the dayyyyyyyyy! |
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Here is a poem I wrote about myself as seen from my future girlfriend's eyes.
Best if read outloud.
Enjoy!
Sentimental Fool
(Learn to Walk on Coals)
You are so hard to fathom
Yet so easy to get to know
Sentimental and deep as a chasm
Ever-waiting for your valley to show
Will you ever let your fears go?
So you can let your love in?
Bitten many times - heal so slow
But you still find time to make me grin
Afraid of the damage of sin
You tend to seek and hide
Different from all the rest of them
Your eyes look as if they’ve laughed and cried
Are you just a sentimental fool?
When you’re sure you’re unstoppable
But fear and doubts save and grave you
I guess I’ll just have to learn how to walk on coals
How can you be so open-minded?
Yet so stubborn when you choose wisdom?
Could use more focus but you’re multi-sighted
How do you maintain your multi-discipline discipline?
Curiosity of a child keeps your eyes from dim
Still have shadow, but at least it’s leashed
You are creating your own hymn
Incredibly both teacher and teached
Are you just a sentimental fool?
When you’re sure you’re unstoppable
But fear and doubts save and grave you
I guess I’ll just have to learn how to walk on coals
You bridge the gap between making it up as you go along
And looking to others to learn what you are here to do
Let me help you shed those demons and your past
Let me know you so I can help you know who you are
And more importantly who you can become
Sentimental fool
Wise wonderer
Simplifier or complicator
Will anyone ever truly know you?
Walk on coals, I gotta
I have to learn how to walk on coals
Have to see that the fire of you is actually warmth
Risk the flames and the fear of pain
Walk the coals; there is enough to gain
That I have to lose my doubts, no refrain
I loose my shoes, clear my fear
Can I be in the moment?
All that’s left is to take the first step
And never stop, for a moment’s thought
Will burn right thru my soles
When I’d rather have our souls burn together
My gentle loving sentimental soul |
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Erden Moderator The Endgame

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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 11:59 pm Post subject: |
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| Interesting perspective writing about there, welcome to the site. I know I'e seen you post a few times though. |
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Nameless Paints the Future...


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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 12:12 am Post subject: |
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| Erden wrote: |
| Interesting perspective writing about there, welcome to the site. I know I'e seen you post a few times though. |
Yeah, you're coll!
two Mondays ago I saw you on live chat, and you told us the reason behind your avatar. lol! |
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BYD Super Moderator LSU Tigers National Champions

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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 4:40 am Post subject: |
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SuperHiro SuperHiro.org Caretaker Official Member of the "We Love Jorm" fanclub!

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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 5:39 am Post subject: |
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| Welcome 2.0 to the board, Nameless! |
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Nameless Paints the Future...


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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 6:01 am Post subject: |
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Hi right back, BYD!
Thanks, SuperHiro! XD |
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The_Blob Mimics Powers...


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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 3:37 pm Post subject: |
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| I hope to be able to access chat soon, that would be coll (cool?). heh jk |
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Nameless Paints the Future...


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Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 7:36 am Post subject: |
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| The_Blob wrote: |
| I hope to be able to access chat soon, that would be coll (cool?). heh jk |
yeah! that would be "kewl" lol! |
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